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What kind of lie do you think people commonly say?

작성자: 김*문
2022-12-13 999

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Most parents tell lie when they raise their child. It is hard to control the young only telling the truth. For example, the children hate to go to hospital even they are painful. The mood and sound of hospital make them scared. So, parents usually pretend to go to playground or make a deal with them such as giving the sweets. And, whenever they cry, parents warn "If you cry, the Santa won't give you a present in Christmas. Because Santa hate the child who always cries" It is effective to calm down the children. Furthermore, people usually tell a white lie for their relationship. For instance, the workers can't tell "I want to go to home" even though their boss give them extra tasks. They have to pretend to satisfy to the job and company telling lie. And, people sometime tell a lie among friends. When I want to take some break in my house, I can't explain the reason why I can't meet friends in truth. Rather telling them I am sick.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Mary!

Most parents tell lie when they raise their child. 
>>> correct  
It is hard to control the young only telling the truth. 
>>> It is hard to control the young with only telling the truth.   
For example, the children hate to go to hospital even they are painful. 
>>>   For example, children hate to go to hospital even if they are in pain. 
The mood and sound of hospital make them scared. 
>>>  correct  
So, parents usually pretend to go to playground or make a deal with them such as giving the sweets. 
>>>  correct  
And, whenever they cry, parents warn "If you cry, the Santa won't give you a present in Christmas. Because Santa hate the child who always cries"
>>> And, whenever they cry, parents warn "If you cry, Santa won't give you a present on Christmas, because Santa hates the child who always cries."
 It is effective to calm down the children. 
>>>  It is effective to clam the children down.  
Furthermore, people usually tell a white lie for their relationship. 
>>>  correct     
For instance, the workers can't tell "I want to go to home" even though their boss give them extra tasks. 
>>>  correct    
They have to pretend to satisfy to the job and company telling lie. 
>>> They have to pretend to be satisfied with the job and company by telling a lie.   
And, people sometimes tell a lie among friends. 
>>> correct  
When I want to take some break in my house, I can't explain the reason why I can't meet friends in truth. 
>>> When I want to take some break in my house, I can't truthfully explain the reason why I can't meet friends.   
>>> OR: When I want to take some break in my house, I can't honestly explain the reason why I can't meet friends. 
Rather telling them I am sick.
>>> Rather, I tell them I am sick.

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