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If I can change about myself, I will change my height.
Because I¡¯m 170cm, I can¡¯t wear high heels.
So if I can change about myself, I want to change about my height for 170cm to 165cm.

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Good day, Jenna! I appreciate your honesty in answering and making the composition about yourself. They say, by accepting yourself and fully being what you are, your simple presence can make others happy. I'll see you in class.~ T. Lyn
If I can change about myself, I will change my height.
>>Correct. If I can change anything about myself, that would be my height.
Because I¡¯m 170cm, I can¡¯t wear high heels.
>>It is because I am 170 cm and I can't wear my high heels.
So if I can change about myself, I want to change about my height for 170cm to 165cm.
>>So if I can change myself, I want to change my height from 170 cm to 165 cm.
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