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Wild ginseng, cordyceps, and red ginseng are popular medicinal herbs in Korea. Wild ginseng and red ginseng are so famous and popular that no one don't knows about them. And I'm not familiar with traditional remedies. However, if you look at the book called Donguibogam, it is listed.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Wild ginseng, cordyceps, and red ginseng are popular medicinal herbs in Korea. 
>>> CORRECT!

Wild ginseng and red ginseng are so famous and popular that no one don't knows about them. 
>>> Wild ginseng and red ginseng are so famous and popular that no one doesn't know about them. 

And I'm not familiar with traditional remedies. 
>>> CORRECT!

However, if you look at the book called Donguibogam, it is listed.
>>> CORRECT!
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