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I would buy an EV due to environmental causes. As you might have known, we¡¯ve already experienced climate change that contributed to more natural disasters worldwide. We can¡¯t postpone taking action against climate change anymore. Replacing fossil-fuel-powered cars with EVs is one of the practical ways that we can do to preserve our planet. Nowadays, Our government is trying to increase more infrastructure for EVs, such as electronic charging points, and is also trying to secure more budget to increase government¡¯s subsidies for EVs to have more EVs which are sure to contribute to green nature. Automobile companies are no exception in our efforts to preserve nature. They try to develop technologies with which more consumers can have better EVs at more reasonable prices.

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I would buy an EV due to environmental causes. 
>>> CORRECT!

As you might have known, we¡¯ve already experienced climate change that contributed to more natural disasters worldwide. 
>>> CORRECT!

We can¡¯t postpone taking action against climate change anymore. 
>>> CORRECT!

Replacing fossil-fuel-powered cars with EVs is one of the practical ways that we can do to preserve our planet.
>>> CORRECT!

Nowadays, Our government is trying to increase more infrastructure for EVs, such as electronic charging points, and is also trying to secure more budget to increase government¡¯s subsidies for EVs to have more EVs which are sure to contribute to green nature. 
>>> Nowadays, Our government is trying to increase more infrastructure for EVs, such as electronic charging points, and is also trying to secure more budget to increase government subsidies for EVs to have more EVs which are sure to contribute to green nature. 

Automobile companies are no exception in our efforts to preserve nature. 
>>> CORRECT!

They try to develop technologies with which more consumers can have better EVs at more reasonable prices.
>>> CORRECT!
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