¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Is it necessary to study about the space? Why or why not?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±¸*¿ì
2022-12-11 693

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I think it is necessary to study about the space. It's because if we read some books or newspapers about the space, and if we studied about the space it is very helpful for understand about it. But if we don't study about space like basic theories, we can't talk about the space and get some knowledge of the space.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Daisy! :)
It's Monday again. ^^ How are you doing? Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay questions. I think the space is a very fascinating place. People want to study it to discover its vastness and if other beings like us also exist. 
Anyhow, I hope you're doing great. See you in class later. ^_^
~Teacher Charry

I think it is necessary to study about the space. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because if we read some books or newspapers about the space, and if we studied about the space it is very helpful for understand about it. 
>> It's because when we read some books or newspapers about the space and study about the space, they are very helpful for us to understand it. 
But if we don't study about space like basic theories, we can't talk about the space and get some knowledge of the space.
>> CORRECT!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
123902 Homework (11/30) ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 6
123901 Airplanes are very important. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 706
123900 HOMEWORK: How much free time do you spend on the net? Would you... ¾Ù* ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1
123899 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1
123898 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 0
123897 Too much ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1
123896 Tipping culture in Korea ±è*½Ä ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1186
123895 homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 0
123894 Wednesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 845
123893 Do you think South Korea should also start developing nuclear... ±è*¹® ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1081
123892 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1
123891 How do you minimize your spending on food? Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 708
123890 Homework~~ ¹Ú*Çü ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 792
123889 Do you agree that Apple and Google should both be penalized due... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 973
123888 29.11.Nov ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 9
123887 What is the best way to make new friends? ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 0
123886 What was the most severe disease you ever had? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1
123885 If you could have a conversation with any famous living person,... Àü*ä ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 1107
123884 If you were invited to a fancy dinner with the president, what... ±è*¼º ¿Ï·á 2022-11-30 7
123883 Why are some people not interested in sports? ¾ç*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-11-29 803

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04