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The life without mobile phone

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Life without a mobile phone would be very difficult.
There were no mobile phones in the past, but at that time there were no mobile phones from the beginning, and now everything has improved a lot, but if mobile phones disappear now, it will be very difficult.
People won't be comfortable getting food delivered, not making long phone calls or sending text messages.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Life without a mobile phone would be very difficult.
>>> CORRECT!

There were no mobile phones in the past, but at that time there were no mobile phones from the beginning, and now everything has improved a lot, but if mobile phones disappear now, it will be very difficult.
>>> There were no mobile phones in the past, but at that time there were no mobile phones from the beginning, now everything has improved a lot, but if mobile phones disappear now, it will be very difficult.

People won't be comfortable getting food delivered, not making long phone calls or sending text messages.
>>> People won't be comfortable getting food delivered, not making long phone calls, or sending text messages.
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