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Do you think you can be a vegetarian? Why or why not?

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No, maybe I can't be a vegetarian never. First of all, I love cuisines that are made of meat. Whenever I have a meal, I hope the pork or chicken will on the table. And, there are lots of delicious food using meat as ingredients in Korea. Korean soul food is also Samgyeopsal(grilled pork belly) and it's famous to the foreigners. Second, I want to ingest various nutrients from food. If I eat only vegetables, I can only get mineral, vitamin.. Meat, fish, egg are the best way to gain important nutrient especially, protein. Comparing tofu with meat, the amount of protein that we can get is different. Tofu has less protein that other ingredients like meat, egg. At last, most vegetarians think butchering animals is unethical way. However, it is natural cycle that we should accept. For example, when the wild lion hunt buffalo, is it unethical and wrong? Based on food chain, it is natural thing, Although we shouldn't harass and distress animals, eating them in purpose of survival is different.

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Thanks for this Mary.

No, maybe I can't be a vegetarian never. 
>>>> No, maybe I can't be a vegetarian ever. 
>>> OR: No, maybe I can never be a vegetarian.   
First of all, I love cuisines that are made of meat. 
>>>> correct  
Whenever I have a meal, I hope the pork or chicken will on the table. 
>>>>   Whenever I have a meal, I hope the pork or chicken will be on the table. 
And, there are lots of delicious food using meat as ingredients in Korea. 
>>>> correct      
Korean soul food is also Samgyeopsal (grilled pork belly) and it's famous to the foreigners. 
>>>> correct   
Second, I want to ingest various nutrients from food. 
>>>> correct   
If I eat only vegetables, I can only get mineral, vitamin.. 
>>>> correct    
Meat, fish, egg are the best way to gain important nutrient especially, protein. 
>>>> correct   
Comparing tofu with meat, the amount of protein that we can get is different. 
>>>> correct   
Tofu has less protein that other ingredients like meat, egg. 
>>>> Tofu has lesser protein than other ingredients like meat or egg.   
At last, most vegetarians think butchering animals is unethical way. 
>>>> OR: At last, most vegetarians think butchering animals is unethical.
However, it is natural cycle that we should accept. 
>>>> However, it is a natural cycle that we should accept.   
For example, when the wild lion hunt buffalo, is it unethical and wrong?
>>>>   For example, when the wild lion hunts a buffalo, is it unethical and wrong?
Based on food chain, it is natural thing.
>>>>   Based on the food chain, it is a natural thing.
 Although we shouldn't harass and distress animals, eating them in purpose of survival is different.
>>>>   OR: Although we shouldn't harass and distress animals, eating them for the purpose of survival is different. 
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