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I will not tell my secret because revealing secretes to others can be my weakness if somebody spreads a rumor. We can¡¯t estimate a person¡¯s mind. It¡¯s really hard to know, so, it must be careful even if people around me are truthful.

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Good day, Judy!

I agree! We will never know what is running in someone's mind. However, we can control ours and keep our own secrets. Now, if the secret is about financial matters, we better find someone trustworthy because some of these money may get forfeited by the bank or the government when there is no one to take charge of it. Oh well, that is, if we have money in the bank... ^^

Take a look at your last sentence and replace 'it' with "I" to make the meaning of the sentence more appropriate. See you later in class!

-T. Donna~

I will not tell my secret because revealing secretes to others can be my weakness if somebody spreads a rumor. 
>> Correct!

We can¡¯t estimate a person¡¯s mind. 
>> Correct!

It¡¯s really hard to know, so, it must be careful even if people around me are truthful.
>> It¡¯s really hard to know, so, I must be careful even if people around me are truthful.
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