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I received many invitations.
Especially, to celebrate the end of this year, many gatherings are scheduled.
However, I couldn't attend all the invitations I received, because some schedules will be open at the same date and time, I have an previous engagement, or I have to make it another important things.
If I am in the situation where I have to refuse an invitation for these reasons, I try to tell the real reasons politely and sincerly why I am not participate in the gatherings.

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Hello there, Dr. Stella!

Sometimes, if we can multiply ourselve to be in one event and another, we would probably do that. However, we can only attend one occasion at a time. Anyway, Thank you very much for this homework answer. I really appreciate your attempt to make longer sentences. Since the sentence gets longer, the more chance of committing mistakes. But then ifyou would not attempt these kinds of sentences, you will improve less.

Then, well done on this compostion!

See you later in class!

-T. Donna~

I
 received many invitations.
>> Correct!

Especially, to celebrate the end of this year, many gatherings are scheduled.
>> Correct!
Or: Many gatherings are scheduled to be especially celebrated at the end of this year.

However, I couldn't attend all the invitations I received, because some schedules will be open at the same date and time, I have an previous engagement, or I have to make it another important things.
>> However, I couldn't attend all the invitations I received, because some schedules will be opened at the same date and time that I have a previous engagement or I have to make other important things.

If I am in the situation where I have to refuse an invitation for these reasons, I try to tell the real reasons politely and sincerly why I am not participate in the gatherings.
>> If I am in the situation where I have to refuse an invitation for these reasons, I try to tell the real reasons politely and sincerly why I am not participating in the gatherings.
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