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Hi there! It is perfect weather to travle and hike. I checked the site and changed my class time 8:20 pm to 9:30 pm. As you know, I bought a book that written by Yuval Harari who is an Israeli and a historian. But the content of the book are mixed with humanities and physics. That is why I am excited the book.

Today's topic is pretty fun. In my opinion, each team's national manager or coach do not need to be native person. Because, in the case of S.Korea soccer team, foreign coaches made better results than Korean managers and they do not be sticked with blood, school ties. They can select based on abilities.

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Hey, William. Thank you for letting me know. I saw the change in schedule and I'm glad you were able to finally get the schedule you want. Change is good sometimes. See you in class later. ~Teacher Jane c",)


It is perfect weather to travle and hike. 
>> It is the perfect weather to travel and hike. 

I checked the site and changed my class time 8:20 pm to 9:30 pm. 
>> I checked the site and changed my class time from 8:20 pm to 9:30 pm. 

As you know, I bought a book that written by Yuval Harari who is an Israeli and a historian. 
>> As you know, I bought a book written by Yuval Harari who is an Israeli and a historian. 

But the content of the book are mixed with humanities and physics. 
>> But the content of the book is mixed with humanities and physics. 

That is why I am excited the book.
>> That is why I am excited to read the book.


Today's topic is pretty fun. 
>> CORRECT =) 

In my opinion, each team's national manager or coach do not need to be native person. 
>> In my opinion, each team's national manager or coach does not need to be a native person. 

Because, in the case of S.Korea soccer team, foreign coaches made better results than Korean managers and they do not be sticked with blood, school ties. 
>> Because, in the case of the South Korean soccer team, foreign coaches gave better results than Korean managers and they are not influenced by blood relations or school ties. 

They can select based on abilities.
>> They can be select based on their abilities.

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