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Why is gambling addictive? Why?

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Some people says like in the casino, there has roulette so there people hear that sounds, the sounds are circling in their brain. Or other people says if they do gambling, the sadness of lost their money is makes them feel uncomfortable so they want to take back their money so it is addictive to them.

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Hi, Daisy. ^_^
Thank you for diligently answering this question. 
I think people become addicted to gambling because of the excitement and the rush that winning from gambling brings. 
They want to keep on experiencing that kind of feeling so they end up getting addicted to it. 
I hope you're having a great day sweetie. See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

Some people says like in the casino, there has roulette so there people hear that sounds, the sounds are circling in their brain. 
>> Some people say that in the casino, the sound of the spinning roulette keeps on circling inside their brains. 
Or other people says if they do gambling, the sadness of lost their money is makes them feel uncomfortable so they want to take back their money so it is addictive to them.
>> On the other hand, other people say that when they lose money from gambling, they feel uncomfortable and want to take their money back so they become addicted to it.
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