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Why do you think it\'s difficult for people to talk about suicide?

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It's because the topic about suicide is very cautious and this word is very sad to depressing to someone's life. Suicide means if someone is feel helpless to their life, then they get die themselves. But if we talk about topic about suicide, it is not manner to already died people.

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Hi, Daisy. 
Thank you for answering this essay question. I think suicide is a cry for help. People who feel helpless sometimes take their lives to show that they need help. Other people shouldn't take this lightly and be kind to others who are going through a tough time in their lives. 
Anyhow, I hope you're doing great my dear. 
See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry

It's because the topic about suicide is very cautious and this word is very sad to depressing to someone's life. 
>> It's because the topic about suicide is very sensitive. In addition, this word is very sad or depressing to someone's life.
Suicide means if someone is feel helpless to their life, then they get die themselves. 
>> Suicide means killing one's self when someone is feeling helpless with their lives. 
But if we talk about topic about suicide, it is not manner to already died people.
>> [Do you mean]: But if we talk about the topic on suicide, it is not appropriate if the person has already died. 
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