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I heard the news that I became a winner of the oral presentation award.
It was the best news I have heard lately.
Actually, it was my first presentation in international conference, and I felt it burdensome to speak in english for 15minutes.
So I practiced the presentation harder than before.
I memorized all the script and repeated several times.
Due to hard training, I was not that nervous and had a good presentation.
Luckily, I received the best oral presentation award.
I thought once again, 'No pain no gain'.

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Hello, Dr. Stella!

Congratulations once again for winning the award. Truly, I perfectly agree that, "No pain, no gain" is true when it comes to success. As I observed in class, you want to be as passionate and energetic as you can be because you want to be a great English speaker. You deserve your award and in the future will reap more.

Below are suggestions for the insertion of 'a' and 'the' as well as the capitalization of 'English'. Thank you for your diligence and precious time in submitting this excllent homewoek!

Have a great day! See you again tomorrow.

-T. Donna~

I heard the news that I became a winner of the oral presentation award.
>> I heard the news that I became the winner of the oral presentation award.

It was the best news I have heard lately.
>> Correct! 

Actually, it was my first presentation in international conference, and I felt it burdensome to speak in english for 15minutes.
>> Actually, it was my first presentation in an international conference, and I felt it burdensome to speak in English for 15minutes.

So I practiced the presentation harder than before.
>> Correct!

I memorized all the script and repeated several times.
>> Correct!

Due to hard training, I was not that nervous and had a good presentation.
>> Correct!

Luckily, I received the best oral presentation award.
>> Correct!

I thought once again, 'No pain no gain'.
>> Correct!
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