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What themes have fascinated artists most through time? Why are artists obsessed with those things?

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Art seems to have fascinated artists the most. Because art is beautiful. Because it's luxurious. Because many people like it. Because there are many meanings in the work. It may vary from person to person, but you can be impressed by the work. Also, the person's personality comes out when you look at the picture he drew. It is because you can make a lot of money if you become famous by drawing pictures. It is also because each person can look at the picture and feel good. Many people like art.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

Art seems to have fascinated artists the most. Because art is beautiful.
>>> CORRECT!

Because it's luxurious. Because many people like it. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because there are many meanings in the work. 
>>> CORRECT!

It may vary from person to person, but you can be impressed by the work. 
>>> CORRECT!

Also, the person's personality comes out when you look at the picture he drew. 
>>> CORRECT!

It is because you can make a lot of money if you become famous by drawing pictures. 
>>> CORRECT!

It is also because each person can look at the picture and feel good. 
>>> CORRECT!

Many people like art.
>>> CORRECT!
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