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Do you think South Korea should also start developing nuclear weapons? Why is that?

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To make peaceful Korea, there have been lots of efforts. We made denuclearization consultation with North Korea in 1991 and we promised to make denuclearization world with the international society. That's why we kept holding conferences between North Korea, Japan and USA. In fact, the nations around us don't want that Korea have nuclear weapons. That's why they keep Korea a from strengthening the power. Instead of maintaining alliance and getting help from the USA, we had to give up developing nuclear weapons. If we have nuclear weapons, USA will be not guaranteed protection from the North Korea and evacuate their military. Also, developing nuclear weapons will take much time so, it will be hard to restrict the North Korea's aggressive behavior. Imposing powerful restrictions will be the best solutions to solve this emergency. However, I am worried that even though the international society isolate the North Korea, they won't care about that.

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Thank you for this Mary!

To make peaceful Korea, there have been lots of efforts. 
>>>  To make a peaceful Korea, there have been lots of efforts.  
>>> OR: To create peace in Korea, there has been lots of effort.
We made denuclearization consultation with North Korea in 1991 and we promised to make denuclearization world with the international society. 
>>> We made denuclearization consultation with North Korea in 1991 and we promised to make a denuclearized world with the international society.  
That's why we kept holding conferences between North Korea, Japan and USA.
>>>  correct
In fact, the nations around us don't want that Korea have nuclear weapons. 
>>> In fact, the nations around us don't want Korea to have nuclear weapons.   
That's why they keep Korea a from strengthening the power. 
>>>  That's why they keep Korea  from strengthening its power.  
Instead of maintaining alliance and getting help from the USA, we had to give up developing nuclear weapons. 
>>>   correct  
If we have nuclear weapons, USA will be not guaranteed protection from the North Korea and evacuate their military.
>>If we have nuclear weapons, USA will not guarantee protection from the North Korea and evacuate their military.   
 Also, developing nuclear weapons will take much time so, it will be hard to restrict the North Korea's aggressive behavior. 
>>>   correct  
Imposing powerful restrictions will be the best solutions to solve this emergency. 
>>>    correct 
However, I am worried that even though the international society isolate the North Korea, they won't care about that.
>>>    correct 

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