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Do you have better conversations when you are drinking? Why or why not?

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Yes, I do. in a way, drinking help make better conversations.
Usually we drink at the bar or quite place so those mood make us relax.
Then, It could give trust and easily talk about our stories.
Drunken people talk about their secret.
Actually it is dangerous so I try to avoid that situations.
I don't like huge alcohol.
But I know that little drink can hlep make a relationship especially unknown people.
It can be close when you drink together.
So I prefer light drink for break awkwardness mood.

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Hello Eun Chae!
Drinking is fun because of the mood it makes.  I definitely agree with you that it makes us sometimes relax.  But too much of it and sometimes the conversations could also lead to expressions of negative feelings.  So, control is really needed with this beverage.  ^^


~T. Maine


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es, I do. in a way, drinking help make better conversations.
>> Yes, I do.  In a way, drinking helps me make better conversations. 
Usually we drink at the bar or quite place so those mood make us relax.
>>Usually, we drink at a bar or quiet place so those kinds of moods make us relax. 
Then, It could give trust and easily talk about our stories.
>> Then, it could give us trust and easily share with each other a lot of stories. 
Drunken people talk about their, secret.
>> Drunken people talk about their secrets. 
Actually it is dangerous so I try to avoid that situations.
>>Actually, it is dangerous so I try to avoid the situation. 
I don't like huge alcohol.
>> I don't like to drink a lot of alcohol. 
But I know that little drink can hlep make a relationship especially unknown people.
>> But I know that a little drink can help build a good relationship, especially with unknown people. 
It can be close when you drink together.
>> It can make you close to each other when you drink together. 
So I prefer light drink for break awkwardness mood.
>> So I prefer light drinks to break the awkward mood. 

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