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I like to eat Korean food, and I prefer eating meal including rice at least once a daily.
Because I feel full and satisfied after I eat rice.
However, as I usually eat Korean food at home, I tend to choose Western, Japanese or Chinese restaurant.
Especially, I love to eat pasta and Sushi.
When I go to Western restaurant, I used to select cream pasta.
Among cream pasta, I order recommended menu from restaurant manager.
At the Japanese restaurant, I prefer picking special sushi set.
That's because I want to taste a variety of raw fishes.

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Good morning, Dr. Stella!

It is wonderful to see you here on the composition page once again!

Your food preference is a variety of cuisine. At times, our palate longs to taste other savory dishes from another countries since they are not present in ours. In your country, dishes around the world are available. Hence, indulge and enjoy then when you can.

Here on your homework, generally, the use of 'a' and 'the are my grammar suggestions. So, kindly read and analyze how they were inserted in some of your sentences.

Congratulations on a job well done!

-T. Donna~

I like to eat Korean food, and I prefer eating meal including rice at least once a daily.
>> I like to eat Korean food and I prefer eating meal including rice at least (once a day/ daily).

Because I feel full and satisfied after I eat rice.
>> Because, I feel full and satisfied after I eat rice.
>> I feel full and satisfied after I eat rice.

However, as I usually eat Korean food at home, I tend to choose Western, Japanese or Chinese restaurant.
>> Correct!

Especially, I love to eat pasta and Sushi.
>> Correct!

When I go to Western restaurant, I used to select cream pasta.
>> When I go to a Western restaurant, I used to select cream pasta.

Among cream pasta, I order recommended menu from restaurant manager.
>> Among cream pasta, I order the recommended menu from restaurant manager.

At the Japanese restaurant, I prefer picking special sushi set.
>> At the Japanese restaurant, I prefer picking a special sushi set.

That's because I want to taste a variety of raw fishes.
>> Correct!
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