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How many best friends do you have?

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I have many best friends. But, I have two VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY best friends. They are Arah and Dorocy. Yup. Her name's spelling is really DoroCY, not DoroTHY. Then, well I've told much about my friends. It is no t that I do not know about them much. It is that I do not meet them much and still, you get it, right? What I really want to say is, instead of having an obvious thing to write about, I really like writing fantasies. So, I'd like to use the key expressions, key words, and sometimes, key questions to write a fantasy for compositions. If you agree please tell me YES in class.

P.S. By the way, I downloaded my JUNIOR LOWER ADVANCE 2 !!!☕

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Hello Heather! It's really great to hear that you have a lot of best friends. Remember that a true friend accepts who you are and helps you who you should be. Keep them~ I'll see you in class!~ T. Lyn
I have many best friends. 
>>Correct. I have lot of best friends.
But, I have two VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY best friends. 
>>But, I have only two really closest and best friends.
They are Arah and Dorocy. 
>>Correct.
Yup. Her name's spelling is really DoroCY, not DoroTHY. 
>>Yup! Her name is actually spelled Dorocy, and not Dorothy.
Then, well I've told much about my friends. 
>>Well, I talked a lot about my friends.
It is no t that I do not know about them much. 
>>It is not that I don't know much about them.
It is that I do not meet them much and still, you get it, right? 
>>Even though we don't meet often, we are still friends and you know that right?
What I really want to say is, instead of having an obvious thing to write about, I really like writing fantasies. 
>>What I really want to say is that I really like writing fantasy more than writing the obvious.
So, I'd like to use the key expressions, key words, and sometimes, key questions to write a fantasy for compositions. 
>>So, to write a fantasy story, I will use the key expressions, keywords and sometimes the key questions of our lesson.
If you agree please tell me YES in class.
>>Correct. You can tell me in class if you agree.
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