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2022-11-28 1283

회원님의 영작문

Hello, T.Donna.
It's pouring outside.
And I almost cried all day for many tasks.
The worst thing was that our chief manager said she will resign.
She did her job well these days, so Dr. MJ and I praised her in front of all staff many times.
Thus, I wondered why, and I asked why.
She replied that her father noticed a mass in his bladder through the check-up and they were so nervous, so she can't do anything.
Hence, I supported her and advised what they should do for a bladder mass.
She seemed calm down a little.
However, Dr. MJ and I think she will quit the job consequently.
About our new building check, my dentist friend and I told a company man about many defects, but he was disagreed.
That's why we called the boss of the company, and he said he will fix some parts of the defects, and we were not satisfied with that.
Because of those things on above, I am not sure I can go to Hawaii.
Maybe, my family excepting me can go to Hawaii.
Meanwhile, about my homework, I like a dog.
See you.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there, Dr. Kim!

I heard it was pouring in your country and everyone thinks it is going to be colder. On the contrary, I actually think the low temperature is still far behind due to climate change. Anyway, I hope today is a better day. Well, just like the rain, problems poured in to you yesterday. I hope the clinic manager will still consider staying. However, her reason seems legitimate. You did your best in consoling her and her father.

Meanwhile, it is very sad to hear about your pending vacation to Hawaii due to these series of unfortunate events. Of course, your wife needs you there to assist her with your children. Since you weren't in class today, I could think of you either packing your bags or solving your problems, or both. In time, you will be able to fix everything. Now, you have to ask God for solid strength to overcome all these. 

Anyway, I thank you very much for sending your homework inspite of these all. Your consistency is incomparable, hence, your success is always guaranteed. Keep your head up and see you soon.

Have a blessed, enlightened, and a better day this Tuesday!

Catch you!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

It's pouring outside.
>> Correct!

And I almost cried all day for many tasks.
>> And I almost cried all day (due to/ because of/ since there were) many tasks.

The worst thing was that our chief manager said she will resign.
>> Correct!

She did her job well these days, so Dr. MJ and I praised her in front of all staff many times.
>> Correct!

Thus, I wondered why, and I asked why.
>> Correct!

She replied that her father noticed a mass in his bladder through the check-up and they were so nervous, so she can't do anything.
>> Correct!

Hence, I supported her and advised what they should do for a bladder mass.
>> Correct!

She seemed calm down a little.
>> Correct!

However, Dr. MJ and I think she will quit the job consequently.
>> Correct!

About our new building check, my dentist friend and I told a company man about many defects, but he was disagreed.
>> About our new building check, my dentist friend and I told the company man about many defects, but he disagreed.

That's why we called the boss of the company, and he said he will fix some parts of the defects, and we were not satisfied with that.
>> Correct!

Because of those things on above, I am not sure I can go to Hawaii.
>> Because of those things above, I am not sure I can go to Hawaii.

Maybe, my family excepting me can go to Hawaii.
>> Maybe, my family except I, can go to Hawaii.

Meanwhile, about my homework, I like a dog.
>> Correct!

See you.
>> Correct!
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