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Your country is best at which sports? Why is it strong at these?

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The strongest sport in Korea is an archery.
In every olympic archery matchs, Korean teams get golden-medals regardless of sex.
Korean people believes that our ancestors were good at archery, but the truth is not.
The reason that Korean archery team is strong is that Hyundai-car company invests a lot of money.
And then Korean-association is always doing its best to select players in fair ways.

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Hi, Ian!
Thank you for doing your homework. It is really nice if the government and some private institutions support athletes and sports. These can really encourage athletes to play better, improve on their chosen sport and bring honor to one's country.
-T. Caitlyn
The strongest sport in Korea is an archery.
>> The strongest sport in Korea is archery.
In every olympic archery matchs, Korean teams get golden-medals regardless of sex.
>> In every Olympic archery match, Korean teams get gold medals regardless of sex.
Korean people believes that our ancestors were good at archery, but the truth is not.
>> Koreans believe that our ancestors were good at archery, but the truth is that they are not.
The reason that Korean archery team is strong is that Hyundai-car company invests a lot of money.
>> The reason that the Korean archery team is strong is that Hyundai, a car company, invests a lot of money in it.
And then Korean-association is always doing its best to select players in fair ways.
>> Also, the Korean association always does its best to select players in a fair way.
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