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What kinds of things do you think cannot be recycled?

Really, many plastics can't be recycled. For example, already used delivery food bowl and cosmetic case. If we want to recycle, we should wash clearly.

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What kinds of things do you think cannot be recycled?
>> CORRECT
Really, many plastics can't be recycled. 
>> Many plastics cannot be recycled. 
For example, already used delivery food bowl and cosmetic case. 
>> For example, used delivery food bowls and cosmetic cases. 
If we want to recycle, we should wash clearly.
>> If we want to recycle, we should wash them clearly.
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