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Would you prefer an English teacher from your own country or one from an English-speaking country?

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I prefer teacher who from an English-speaking country like my teacher.
It is because I can speak only English.
I cannot speak Korea when even teacher can't understand what I'm saying.
That make me research some words and that way can improve my English skill.
But sometimes when I don't know how I saying, I feel hard.
But my teacher always help to complet my sentence.
Another good thing is we can share our country cultures and stories.
I like heard my teacher's country stories that also learn friendship and English.
For this reasons I like teacher from an English-speaking country.

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Hello Eun Chae!
Thank you for writing your homework.  Always keep in mind to check your spelling when typing and read your corrections after it's read by your teacher.  Try copying your native teacher so you will also become like him or her.  Always have the passion to improve yourself not only in English. ( ^_^ )



~T. Maine


I prefer teacher who from an English-speaking country like my teacher.
>> I prefer a teacher who is from an English-speaking country like my teacher. 
It is because I can speak only English.
>> It is because I can only speak English with her. 
I cannot speak Korea when even teacher can't understand what I'm saying.
>> I cannot speak Korean because my teacher can't understand what I'm saying. 
That make me research some words and that way can improve my English skill.
>> That makes me research some words and in that way I can improve my English skill. 
But sometimes when I don't know how I saying, I feel hard.
>> But sometimes when I don't know how to say a word, I feel stuffy. 
But my teacher always help to complet my sentence.
>> But my teacher always helps me complete my sentences. 
Another good thing is we can share our country cultures and stories.
>> Another good thing is we can share our country's cultures and stories. 
I like heard my teacher's country stories that also learn friendship and English.
>> I like to hear my teacher's country stories to learn both friendship and language. 
For this reasons I like teacher from an English-speaking country.
>> For these reasons, I like a teacher from an English-speaking country. 

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