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Thanks for this as well Mary!

If the seniors are used to using that, they won't be afraid of visiting restaurants. 
>>> correct  
But even the speed and accuracy make comfortable life, human should lead the society not robots. 
>>>  But even if the speed and accuracy make a comfortable life, humans should lead the society not robots.   
Against to salary increasing, most self-ownerships decide to utilize robots. 
>>> OR:  Contradictory to salary increasing, most self-ownerships decide to utilize robots.    
But, if the role of human is replaced with the robots, it is harder to make a living. 
>>> correct  
Finally, the risk of robots has been suggesting now on. 
>>> Finally, the risk of robots has been suggested these days.   
There are some opinions that the robots have their own emotion and thinking. 
>>>  correct 
So, investing money to well fare is more realistic to solve the social problems rather than developing and depending on the scientific technology.
>>> correct   
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