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Hello, T.Donna.
How was your day?
I had a peaceful day.
There was no big problem in the clinic.
Everything was fine except for our new building.
The new building has five floors on the land and second floors under land.
Under the land, there are parking lots.
I have third and fourth floors in the building, and my close dentist has fifth floor.
The dentist called me this afternoon and said "There are many problems in the building and we should request for fixing those things.".
So, we decided to visit the boss of selling department tomorrow.
And there was another problem.
I requested how much I should pay for air conditioning including heating and cooling in our future clinic.
The company gave us the paper about payment and it is too expensive than we expected.
Of course, we can change the company of it, but I think it will take more money than we expected even if we find other one.
The last movie that I watched with my daughters is "Frozen".
"Let it go~"
See you~

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Hi there, Dr. Kim! Good evening!

My day was fleeting during the afternoon. I made fresh garden salad and chowed it down in front of the television watching news. In the late afternoon, I borrowed the cutter from my sister and trimmed my front yard. As a result, my left chest is sore but I am so happy to see my garden like a very handsome man with a new haircut!

Anyway, it's good to know that your clinic was smooth sailing today. I guess, new clinics could really be a pain in the neck due to the final details you have to think of and condsider. Well, a few more months or days from now,  you are moving to your new professional home, so everything needs to be perfect. Thus, do not haste and consider your options about your air conditioning provider among others. As you know it, inflation also takes effect to home parts and accessories so nothing cheap comes nowadays.

As the song in Frozen goes, "Let it go, let it go...", sometimes, you just have to breathe deeply, think and solve the problem, and let it go to live another day. So, I'm letting you go for now. Get well from your colds and see you again tomorrow on a brand new day!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

How was your day?
>> Correct!

I had a peaceful day.
>> Correct!

There was no big problem in the clinic.
>> Correct!

Everything was fine except for our new building.
>> Correct!

The new building has five floors on the land and second floors under land.
>> Correct!

Under the land, there are parking lots.
>> Correct!

I have third and fourth floors in the building, and my close dentist has fifth floor.
>> I have the third and the fourth floors in the building, and a close dental clinic is on the fifth floor.

The dentist called me this afternoon and said "There are many problems in the building and we should request for fixing those things.".
>> Correct!
Or: The dentist called me this afternoon and said, "There are many problems in the building and we should request fixing those things.".

So, we decided to visit the boss of selling department tomorrow.
>> So, we decided to visit the boss of the selling department tomorrow.

And there was another problem.
>> Correct!

I requested how much I should pay for air conditioning including heating and cooling in our future clinic.
>> Correct!

The company gave us the paper about payment and it is too expensive than we expected.
>> Correct!

Of course, we can change the company of it, but I think it will take more money than we expected even if we find other one.
>> Of course, we can change the air conditioning company, but I think it will take more money than we expected even if we find other one.

The last movie that I watched with my daughters is "Frozen".
>> Correct!

"Let it go~"
>> Correct!

See you~
>> Correct!
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