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1. Are teens considered young adults in your country?
A : I'd have to say it's No. Also, most of people tend to think that they're not adults in early 20s.
2. How should parents discipline their teens?
A : In my country they set a curfew and don't allow their teens to use smart phone.
3. What were the things you weren't allowed to do when you were a teenager?
A : When I was a little, I wasn't able to play the game things. Like going PC caffe shop, arcade station.

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Hello there Elic. Kuddos for give this your best shot. Good job, you've made wonderful sentences which are very informative. You managed to explain your answers very well. However, there are some patterns that I provided for you to review. Thank you and have a great day!

I'd have to say it's No. Also, most of people tend to think that they're not adults in early 20s.
>> I'd have to say no because most young people tend to think that they're already adults in their early 20s.
In my country they set a curfew and don't allow their teens to use smart phone.
>> In my country, they set a curfew and prohibit their teens from using their smartphones.
When I was a little, I wasn't able to play the game things. Like going PC caffe shop, arcade station.
>> When I was a little boy, I wasn't able to play games in PC café shops and arcade stations.

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