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How important is freedom of the press?

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Freedom of the press is one of the most important right with freedom of speech. There are a lot of ancestors who tried to get it and keep it from dictators and politicians who were rulling a governments around the world. Many people don't know the importance of freedom, because they haven't experienced lives without it. We alwanlys watch TV news and read newspapers so we can understand what presidential office does and what kind of goals they have. If freedom of press doesn't gurantee, the government push editors to publish what they want to show to public. It results on a lot of social problems. People might not have freedom of speech so they might be monitored what they talk, even at home. How horrible it is! It is really easy to find news through internet but there are too many fake news nowadays. It creates another conflicts among people. There should be strong business-ethics for journalists and they have to publish based on evidence all the time.

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Freedom of the press is one of the most important right with freedom of speech. 
>> CORRECT! 
There are a lot of ancestors who tried to get it and keep it from dictators and politicians who were rulling a governments around the world. 
>> There are a lot of ancestors who tried to get it and keep it from dictators and politicians who were ruling governments around the world. 
Many people don't know the importance of freedom, because they haven't experienced lives without it. 
>> CORRECT! 
We alwanlys watch TV news and read newspapers so we can understand what presidential office does and what kind of goals they have. 
>> We always watch TV news and read newspapers so we can understand what presidential office does and what kind of goals they have. 
If freedom of press doesn't gurantee, the government push editors to publish what they want to show to public. 
>> If freedom of press doesn't guarantee it, the government push editors to publish what they want to show to the public. 
It results on a lot of social problems. 
>> CORRECT! 
People might not have freedom of speech so they might be monitored what they talk, even at home.
>> People might not have freedom of speech so they might be monitored on how they talk, even at home.
How horrible it is! 
>> CORRECT! 
It is really easy to find news through internet but there are too many fake news nowadays. 
>> It is really easy to find news through the internet but there are too many fake news nowadays. 
It creates another conflicts among people. 
>> It creates another conflict among people. 
OR >> It creates conflicts among people.
There should be strong business-ethics for journalists and they have to publish based on evidence all the time.
>> CORRECT! 

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