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Some religions forbid blood transfusions.

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We have rights to have religions. No one can choose and force having religions. Furthermore, only I myself can make decision based on religion. It means every decision should be not interrupted by others. If there is someone who don't want to get blood transfusions based on her/his own faith, we can persuade but can't punish or blame. We have to respect her/his own judgement. Absolutely, I can't understand and don't know why religions forbid blood transfusions. It is related to the life and it can be more holistic. However, we can't regulate that because it can violate freedom of religion. On the other hand, if parents reject the kid's blood transfusions, we have to forbid and prevent that situation. Children are too young to consider in a right way. So, parents have responsibility of protecting children. But parents can't judge on their faith. It is not the kids' decision. The government have to admit the freedom of religion but they also have to protect people's safety.

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Thanks for this Mary. I agree with what you said. Although, sometimes, some religions would have a very unreasonable belief.

We have rights to have religions. 
>>>  correct
>>> OR: We have the right for freedom of religion.
No one can choose and force having religions. 
>>>  correct
Furthermore, only I myself can make decision based on religion. 
>>>  correct
It means every decision should be not interrupted by others. 
>>>  It means, every decision should not be interrupted by others. 
>>>  OR: It means, every decision should not be interefered by others. 
If there is someone who don't want to get blood transfusions based on her/his own faith, we can persuade but can't punish or blame. 
>>>  correct
We have to respect her/his own judgement. 
>>> correct  
Absolutely, I can't understand and don't know why religions forbid blood transfusions. 
>>> correct    
It is related to the life and it can be more holistic. 
>>>   correct  
However, we can't regulate that because it can violate freedom of religion. 
>>>   correct  
On the other hand, if parents reject the kid's blood transfusions, we have to forbid and prevent that situation. 
>>>   correct  
Children are too young to consider in a right way. 
>>>  Children are too young to consider what is right.
So, parents have responsibility of protecting children. 
>>So, parents have the responsibility of protecting their children.  
But parents can't judge on their faith.
>>>   correct  
 It is not the kids' decision. 
>>>   correct  
The government have to admit the freedom of religion but they also have to protect people's safety.
>>>  The government has to admit the freedom of religion but they also have to protect people's safety.
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