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Is cloning good or bad? Why or why not?

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I think ir is bad. Because if we get cloning, the clone will confuse with real human. And the cloning technology is not perfectly stable. Maybe the clone will conquer our world or they broke the world where we live in.

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Hi, Daisy. 
Thank you for writing an essay. 
I agree that cloning has its pros and cons. At the moment, I don't think humans are ready for it. 
Anyhow, I hope you're doing great. See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry

I think ir is bad. 
>> I think it is bad. 
Because if we get cloning, the clone will confuse with real human. 
>> It's because if we allow cloning, the clone will be confused for the real human. 
And the cloning technology is not perfectly stable. 
>> In addition, the cloning technology is not perfectly stable. 
Maybe the clone will conquer our world or they broke the world where we live in.
>> Maybe the clone will conquer our world or they may break the world where we live in.
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