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Hello.
Peaceful Thursday!
There is nothing special in the clinic today.
However, as always, I have plenty of paperwork.
I decided to shot a video next weekend suddenly.
So, I have to prepare a script for that.
And there are schedules of staff education tomorrow and next Thursday.
In addition, I promised Dr. MJ that I will make an educational video for the future doctor of our clinic.
Actually, I've put off this work, and deadline is coming so fast.
When I was a college student, I thought that a doctor only have to see a patient precisely.
However, as you can see, a doctor always should be both the boss of the company and the important worker, and this makes us so stressed and tired.
Anyway, my vacation is approaching, so I am alright.
Meanwhile, today's homework "vote" is very important, because politician makes policy.
We have to check the candidate's qualification and political campaign.
Above all, I never select one who praise North Korea or get along with Civic group.
See you.

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Good morning, Dr. Kim!

How was your night? I am sure it was fun. I wish you more fun-filled evenings with your family. It is such a delight to hear that there was nothing  unusual in your clinic. It would be good if it stays that way.

Best of luck with your video and in making the script. As early as now, you are creating legacy of what your clinic should be and where it is going to the future.

As I have read and commented on your sentences below, one long sentences caught me attention as it was very organized and clearly stated. By now, your ability to make this kind of sentence is expected after many months of speaking and writing English. So, keep up the good work!

The weekend is here, so make the most out of it! Work hard, pause and enjoy the weekend!

See you again next week!

-T. Donna~

Hello.
>> Correct!

Peaceful Thursday!
>> Correct!

There is nothing special in the clinic today.
>> Correct!

However, as always, I have plenty of paperwork.
>> Correct!

I decided to shot a video next weekend suddenly.
>> I decided to shoot a video next weekend suddenly.

So, I have to prepare a script for that.
>> Correct!

And there are schedules of staff education tomorrow and next Thursday.
>> Correct!

In addition, I promised Dr. MJ that I will make an educational video for the future doctor of our clinic.
>> Correct!

Actually, I've put off this work, and deadline is coming so fast.
>>  Actually, I've put off this work, and the deadline is coming so fast.

When I was a college student, I thought that a doctor only have to see a patient precisely.
>>  When I was a college student, I thought that a doctor only has to see a patient precisely.

However, as you can see, a doctor always should be both the boss of the company and the important worker, and this makes us so stressed and tired.
>> Correct! Excellent sentence!

Anyway, my vacation is approaching, so I am alright.
>> Correct!

Meanwhile, today's homework "vote" is very important, because politician makes policy.
>> Correct!
Or: Meanwhile, today's homework about "vote" is very important, because politicians make policies.

We have to check the candidate's qualification and political campaign.
>> Correct!

Above all, I never select one who praise North Korea or get along with Civic group.
>> Above all, I never select one who praises North Korea or get along with Civic group.

See you.
>> Correct!
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