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Who is the most controversial personality in your country? Why?

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From my perspective, Kim, Gun-hee who is the current president's wife stands out the most. She is really controversial in many ways.
First of all, she has a lot of suspicions from her graduation of degree, master and doctor to carries. Also, she is not trustworthy, I mean, although she claimed before being the first lady that not showing off to the public due to her fake degrees, she always wants to appeal herself to the public.
Nevertheless, some people support her. That's why she come out the media frequently.

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Good afternoon, Jane!
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Thank you for accomplishing your homework.
Are you familiar with the expression "negative publicity is still publicity"? Many personalities do that because they think it is better than having no publicity at all.

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From my perspective, Kim, Gun-hee who is the current president's wife stands out the most.
>>> From my perspective, Kim Gun-hee, who is the current president's wife, stands out the most.
She is really controversial in many ways.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: She is really contentious in various ways.
First of all, she has a lot of suspicions from her graduation of degree, master and doctor to carries.
>>> First of all, there are many suspicions regarding her bachelor's, master's, and doctoral degrees.
>>> OR: Her bachelor's, master's, and doctoral degrees are the first area where there are a lot of questions.
Also, she is not trustworthy, I mean, although she claimed before being the first lady that not showing off to the public due to her fake degrees, she always wants to appeal herself to the public.
>>> Also, she is not trustworthy; I mean, although she claimed before being the first lady that she would not show off to the public due to her fake degrees, she always wants to appeal to the public.
>>> OR: She is also unreliable because, despite having false degrees, which she claimed she would not flaunt before becoming first lady, she constantly tries to win over the people.
Nevertheless, some people support her. That's why she come out the media frequently.
>>> Nevertheless, some people support her. That's why she comes out to the media frequently.
>>> OR: Nevertheless, she has some supporters. She routinely engages with the media as a result.
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