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2022-11-09 1737

회원님의 영작문

Hello, T.Donna.
It's already Wednesday.
Actually, my family(except for me) and relatives are going to the amusement park "EverLand" tomorrow.
They are my wife's sister's family.
Thus I expect to meet brother-in-law(wife's sister's husband) tomorrow evening in my house.
He is a pharmacist and has a sense of humor.
He also like to drink alcohol and sing a song, so we are very close.
Hence, I am looking forward tomorrow.
Perhaps, I can't sleep early tomorrow.
So, I am not sure if I can join the Friday class.
In addition, I have special plans this weekend.
First, I plan to meet our colleague franchise doctors on Saturday, and we are supposed to drink for a long time.
After that, I have a big academy on Sunday.
I will take the emcee of some part(actually I don't want it) and have to do lots of works under the elderly doctors.
Meanwhile, today's homework is about politics.
I don't like politicians, but I think we should know them.
That's because vote is very important.
See you tomorrow.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Dr. Kim!

I am sure that your ladies will have the best time of their lives tomorrow. What a shame you cannot go with them. Anyway, you will have your own fun time with your brother-in-law over some songs and a couple of drink. You must be so excited! It is going to be a fired up Thursday night. Go ahead and enjoy yourself, you deserve it.

For the coming weekend, you will emcee and I think that you can do that job excellently as evident on your YouTube video. Your movements are controlled and if you insert appropriate humor, the program is going to be engaging. So, be a fun and witty emcee. I can't wait to hear how you did it. Have a fantastic time with your colleagues as well.

Now, politics is one thing that people dread to discuss. They say in talks or religion and politics, there should never be a contest. However, you are right, we ought to know and learn to vote for the best leaders for the future of our children.

Your composition has clarity, good organization, and meaty content, congratulations! Please check out the grammar suggestions as I always remind you.

Good night!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

It's already Wednesday.
>> Correct!

Actually, my family(except for me) and relatives are going to the amusement park "EverLand" tomorrow.
>> Correct!

They are my wife's sister's family.
>> Correct!

Thus I expect to meet brother-in-law(wife's sister's husband) tomorrow evening in my house.
>> Thus I expect to meet my brother-in-law (my wife's sister's husband) tomorrow evening in my house.

He is a pharmacist and has a sense of humor.
>> Correct!

He also like to drink alcohol and sing a song, so we are very close.
>> He also likes to drink alcohol and sing a song, so we are very close.

Hence, I am looking forward tomorrow.
>> Correct!

Perhaps, I can't sleep early tomorrow.
>> Correct!

So, I am not sure if I can join the Friday class.
>> Correct!

In addition, I have special plans this weekend.
>> Correct!

First, I plan to meet our colleague franchise doctors on Saturday, and we are supposed to drink for a long time.
>> Correct!

After that, I have a big academy on Sunday.
>> Correct!

I will take the emcee of some part(actually I don't want it) and have to do lots of works under the elderly doctors.
>> I will be the emcee of some parts (actually I don't want it) and have to do lots of work under the elderly doctors.

Meanwhile, today's homework is about politics.
>> Correct!

I don't like politicians, but I think we should know them.
>> Correct!

That's because vote is very important.
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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