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1. impeachment; impeached
Because the chairman had gotten a bribe from the lobbyist, he was impeached after a candlelight vigil.
2. major in
The pilot majored in mechanic engineering at the university and found herself attracted to aircraft. She became the first female pilot in history.
3. presidential candidate/election
There were about 10 presidential candidates in this year's election. That made voters confused when they cast vote.
4. subsidiary
Conglomerates referred to as Jaebul in Korean have lots of subsidiaries like octopus feet.

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1. impeachment; impeached
Because the chairman had gotten a bribe from the lobbyist, he was impeached after a candlelight vigil.
>> OR: As a result of a candle vigil, the chairman was impeached for accepting bribes from a lobbyist.

2. major in
The pilot majored in mechanic engineering at the university and found herself attracted to aircraft. She became the first female pilot in history.
>> correct~~

3. presidential candidate/election
There were about 10 presidential candidates in this year's election. That made voters confused when they cast vote.
>> That made voters confused when they cast their votes.

4. subsidiary
Conglomerates referred to as Jaebul in Korean have lots of subsidiaries like octopus feet.
>> OR: Conglomerates referred to as "chaebol" in Korean have a number of subsidiaries like octopus feet.

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