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How do you enjoy the nice weather?

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If I am going to enjoy a nice weather, I first need to know the weather I am going to enjoy. Then let's say that it is a snowy day. Most people would wear thick and burly boots, pants, coats, and sweatshirts, right? They'll also wear mittens, earmuffs, and wool hats, too. But that is actually a way to stay warm when you are about to play inthe snow. You think you are gonna enjoy? Yep, most people think they are enjoying all, but they are just enjoying a piece of million pieces of fun ways to enjoy winter. You'll have to get a kind BEST friend to play. They should not have tempers! One of my seceret games are game. Tell your friend to count 1minute slow. then make 7 snowballs and put them aside. Grasp a hand full of snow and wait. When your friend looks up, hide. When your friend finds you, spray the snow untill they laugh. Then throw the snowballs! Ha! Now you know one of my many seceret games, find more out yourself! Hint : Some stories will hide in classtime. 🎊

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Hello Heather! I appreciate your honesty. I hope that you are enjoying the weather these days. I heard winter is coming and it's getting colder and colder day by day. Stay warm! I will see you in class. ~ T. Lyn
If I am going to enjoy a nice weather, I first need to know the weather I am going to enjoy. 
>>To enjoy good weather, you must know first what kind of weather you like.
Then let's say that it is a snowy day.
>>So let's say, I enjoy snowy days.
Most people would wear thick and burly boots, pants, coats, and sweatshirts, right? 
>>Most people wear thick, sturdy boots, pants, coats, and sweatshirts, right?
They'll also wear mittens, earmuffs, and wool hats, too. 
>>The also wear mittens, earplugs, and wool hats.
But that is actually a way to stay warm when you are about to play inthe snow.
>>But, it is actually a way to keep warm when trying to play in the snow.
You think you are gonna enjoy? 
>>Do you think you will enjoy it?
Yep, most people think they are enjoying all, but they are just enjoying a piece of million pieces of fun ways to enjoy winter. 
>>Yes, most people think they are enjoying it all, but they are just enjoying the millions of fun ways to enjoy winter.
You'll have to get a kind BEST friend to play. 
>>To play, you need to find a friendly best friend.
They should not have tempers! 
>>Correct. They should not get mad easily.
One of my seceret games are game. 
>>One of my secret games is this one.
Tell your friend to count 1minute slow. 
>>Tell your friend to count slowly to 1 minute.
then make 7 snowballs and put them aside. 
>>Then make 7 snowballs and set them aside.
Grasp a hand full of snow and wait. 
>>Correct. Grab a handful of snow and wait. 
When your friend looks up, hide. 
>>Hide when your friend looks up.
When your friend finds you, spray the snow untill they laugh. 
>>When a friend finds you, he or she sprays the snow until they laugh.
Then throw the snowballs! 
>>Correct.
Ha! Now you know one of my many seceret games, find more out yourself! 
>>Now that you know one of my many secret games, find out for yourself!
Hint : Some stories will hide in classtime. 
>>Hint: Some stories are hidden in class.
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