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The best film I have ever seen is ¡°The sound of music¡±. This movie 1956 American musical drama film produced by Rober wise, and starring Julie Andrews and Christopher Plummer. Filming took place from March to September 1964 in Los Angeles and Salzburg. The Sound of Music was released in the United States on March 2, 1965. Although initial response to the film was mixed, it was a major commercial success, becoming the number one box office film after four weeks, and the highest-grossing film of 1965. The film became popular throughout the world in the end, breaking previous box-office records in twenty-nine countries. The Sound of Music received five Academy Awards, including Best Picture and two Golden Globe Awards. In 1998, the American Film Institute (AFI) listed this film as the fifty-fifth greatest American film of all time and the fourth greatest film musical. I don¡¯t know about the worst film that I have ever watched because I have seen recommendable movies ever since.

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Excellent work, Steve. As always, I have only minimal grammar corrections and I enjoyed reading your homework. You are doing great so keep it up. Movies are meant to be enjoyed and I am happy to know you watch only those that are worthwhile to watch and useful to the development of your English skills as well. Have a good one. ~Jane ^^


The best film I have ever seen is ¡°The sound of music¡±. 
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This movie 1956 American musical drama film produced by Robert wise, and starring Julie Andrews and Christopher Plummer. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Filming took place from March to September 1964 in Los Angeles and Salzburg. 
>> CORRECT =) 

The Sound of Music was released in the United States on March 2, 1965. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Although initial response to the film was mixed, it was a major commercial success, becoming the number one box office film after four weeks, and the highest-grossing film of 1965. 
>> Although the initial response to the film was mixed, it was a major commercial success, becoming the number one box office film after four weeks, and the highest-grossing film of 1965. 

The film became popular throughout the world in the end, breaking previous box-office records in twenty-nine countries. 
>> CORRECT =) 

The Sound of Music received five Academy Awards, including Best Picture and two Golden Globe Awards. 
>> CORRECT =) 

In 1998, the American Film Institute (AFI) listed this film as the fifty-fifth greatest American film of all time and the fourth greatest film musical. 
>> CORRECT =) 

I don¡¯t know about the worst film that I have ever watched because I have seen recommendable movies ever since. 
>> CORRECT =) 


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