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회원님의 영작문

I have learned english since I was in the elementary school.
I was educated english divided into 4 parts, listening, reading, writing and speaking.
Reading and listening skills are evaluated in Suneung, the Korean univeristy entrance exam.
So, I concentrated on improving reading and listening skills of english until I graduated from high school.
Questions for testing listening skiils are relatively easy, because they are composed of simple dialogues.
Therefore, I tried to improve reading skills and spent much time to study reading part.
When I became an university student, I had a chance to write english assays during english writing class.
But, principal skills that I used were reading skills, because I had to read original text books.
Also, I think the most useful skill for my career is reading english, because I should read many english journals.
Surely, all parts of english are important, but in my opinion, reading skills is basis, because reading english.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Dr. Stella!

The four macroskills of Englishwork hand-in-hand to hoe this skill to the fullest. In your country's case, reading and listening skills are vital to pass your examination. Perhaps it's time for your country to focus on speaking skills. 

Meanwhile, I am so glad to know that you have been writing in English even before. This explains why your ideas flow smoothly and you organiztion is impeccable. 

Kindly examine some of the suggestions made on your composition below.\


Thank you so much for your constant effort and diligence in doing your homework.

Have a great day!

-T. Donna~

I have learned english since I was in the elementary school.
>> Correct!
Or: I have learned English since I was in the elementary school.

I was educated english divided into 4 parts, listening, reading, writing and speaking.
>> I was educated in English divided into 4 parts: listening, reading, writing, and speaking.

Reading and listening skills are evaluated in Suneung, the Korean univeristy entrance exam.
>> Correct!

So, I concentrated on improving reading and listening skills of english until I graduated from high school.
>> So, I concentrated on improving my reading and listening skills in English until I graduated from high school.

Questions for testing listening skiils are relatively easy, because they are composed of simple dialogues.
>>  Correct!
Or: skills

Therefore, I tried to improve reading skills and spent much time to study reading part.
>> Therefore, I tried to improve reading skills and spent much time to study the reading part.

When I became an university student, I had a chance to write english assays during english writing class.
>> When I became a university student, I had a chance to write English essays during English writing class.

But, principal skills that I used were reading skills, because I had to read original text books.
>> But, the principal skills that I used were reading skills because I had to read the original text books.

Also, I think the most useful skill for my career is reading english, because I should read many english journals.
>> Correct!
Or: English

Surely, all parts of english are important, but in my opinion, reading skills is basis, because reading english.
>> Surely, all parts of English are important, but in my opinion, reading skills is basic.
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