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Why do people go to see fortunetellers?

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Many people believe the foutunetellers stories.
I think it is related about religion. And actually it is really similar about that.
It is belif that cannot see like good.
When people in danger or nervous, they want to know their future even though it is a fake.
And some people have a blind faith in the foutunetellers talk.
They might be come down and relief when listen to their happy future.
Sometimes foutunetellers talk about bad situation even death.
We can careful a while because of that and maybe it is a good behavior.
In my case, I want to go there when some bad things come to me too much.
I want to remove my bad spirits. and I feel more relax.
I know that it's not good to believe too much so I just enjoy light.
It is just superstiton.

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Hello Eun Chae!
We know fortune tellers are not really telling the future and the truth, but we still go to them because it is interesting to know what they will say.  Remember, you are the only person who can drive your future.  Read your corrections and check your spelling when doing your homework. ^^


~T. Maine

Many people believe the foutunetellers stories.
>> Many people believe in fortune tellers' stories. 

I think it is related about religion. 
>> I think it is related to religion. 

And actually it is really similar about that.
>> And actually, it is really similar to that. 

It is belif that cannot see like good.
>> It is a belief that one cannot see the goodness in one's life. 

When people in danger or nervous, they want to know their future even though it is a fake.
>> When people are in danger or nervous, they want to know their future even though it is fake. 

And some people have a blind faith in the foutunetellers talk.
>> Some people have blind faith in fortune tellers' words. 

They might be come down and relief when listen to their happy future.
>> They might calm down and feel relieved when they listen to their happy future. 

Sometimes foutunetellers talk about bad situation even death.
>> Sometimes fortune tellers talk about bad situations even death. 

We can careful a while because of that and maybe it is a good behavior.
>> We can be careful with it for a while because of that maybe it is good behavior.  

In my case, I want to go there when some bad things come to me too much.
>> In my case, I want to go there when so many bad things come my way. 

I want to remove my bad spirits. 
>> I want to remove my negativity. 

and I feel more relax.
>> And I feel more relaxed. 

I know that it's not good to believe too much so I just enjoy light.
>> I know that it's not good to believe too much of it so I just enjoy a little bit of it. 

It is just superstiton.
>> It's just a superstition. 


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