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Maybe Cherry blossom festival is most important and most famous in Korea.
Actually Korea don't have any important festival, it's just famous.
Because we don't have any religion festival.
Anyway, in spring, cherry blossom festival is taken many cities.
cherry blossom means coming spring and new start.

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Thank you for sharing your ideas about festivals in your country.
~Kelly^^
Maybe Cherry blossom festival is most important and most famous in Korea.
>> Correct
Actually Korea don't have any important festival, it's just famous.
>> Actually, in Korea there is no important festival, just famous one.
Because we don't have any religion festival.
>> Correct
Anyway, in spring, cherry blossom festival is taken many cities.
>> Anyway, in spring, Cherry Blossom Festival is celebrated in many cities.
Cherry blossom means coming spring and new start.
>> Correct
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