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How many subjects do you have at school? Why is it important to learn those subjects?

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I have 5 or 6 subjects in school. In Tuesday, we do 6 subjects in Tuesday. And the rest of the days, well we do 5 subjects. We usally do launguage, math, cultral organazation, and science. But the schedule always changes. These make you study and also know well. Then that makes your test score good. The scores all has effect on your middle school reports and tests. It takes effect on your test ranking of high schools. then if you are 1st or 2nd at high school, you go to Havard College! Yay! So subject are important. ヾ(•¥ø•`)o

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Hello Heather! Good day to you. Thank you for your effort in making and sending your composition. Have a great weekend. I'll see you in class.~ T. Lyn
I have 5 or 6 subjects in school. 
>>I have 50 to 6 subjects at school.
In Tuesday, we do 6 subjects in Tuesday. 
>>I have 6 subjects every Tuesday.
And the rest of the days, well we do 5 subjects.
>>I have 5 subjects every day except on Tuesday.
We usally do launguage, math, cultral organazation, and science. 
>>We usually have language, math, cultural organization, and science.
But the schedule always changes. 
>>However, the schedule changes all the time.
These make you study and also know well. 
>>Because of this reason, I get to study and get to learn more.
Then that makes your test score good. 
>>This will improve my test scores.
The scores all has effect on your middle school reports and tests. 
>>These test scores can greatly affect my transcripts and records.
It takes effect on your test ranking of high schools. 
>>Also, it affects my high school test ranking.
then if you are 1st or 2nd at high school, you go to Havard College! Yay! 
>>If I will rank first or second in high school, I can go to Harvard University.
So subject are important.
>>Therefore, it is important to learn different subjects at school.
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