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1. It looks like affable price.
2. You have to pay for a copyright permission.
3. What do you plan to do?
4. She intends to what she doesn't want to.
5. I have the right what is a freedom during my day off.

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Here are my corrections for this homework, Elic. As you can see, I added a new sentence in the first example because of the misuse of the word "affable", it's okay because you were still able to make incredible sentences on the next items. Please study these corrections well, especially the note that I left there. Thank you very much!

- Teacher Raven :)

1. It looks like affable price.
>> You seem to be an affable person. (remember that we use "affable" to describe a person as friendly or pleasant, not for an object.) 
NOTE: If you want to describe a 'price', try using the word 'reasonable' or 'favorable' instead.
2. You have to pay for a copyright permission.
>> Correct.
3. What do you plan to do?
>> Correct.
4. She intends to what she doesn't want to.
>> She intends to do what she doesn't want to do.
5. I have the right what is a freedom during my day off.
>> I have the right to have some freedom during my day off.
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