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Teacher Jeny
On the way to the my cafe.
I went to the market. I bought food materials.
Nowdays Itaewon memorialdays in Korea.
it`s quiet here this area~
But we are group reservations for the 2nd floor this on sunday.
we will ready to set upm on the table.
After work my staff made japhae we had lunch time it was very delicious.
Have you great weekend

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Hello Rara!!!

It is a big step for you to have confidence, confidence is on of the key factors in seeing yourself on the top, speaking the English language well.

I know you can do it, you can achieve your goals!!!

T. Jeny


Teacher Jeny
>>correct
On the way to the my cafe.
>>On my way to the cafe.
I went to the market. I bought food materials.
>>correct
Nowdays Itaewon memorialdays in Korea.
>>It is Itaewon memorial days in Korea nowadays.
it`s quiet here this area~
>>It's quiet in this area.
But we are group reservations for the 2nd floor this on sunday.
>>But we have a group reservation on the 2nd floor this Sunday.
we will ready to set upm on the table.
>>We will set up the tables.
After work my staff made japhae we had lunch time it was very delicious.
>>After work, my staff made Japchae, and we had a delicious lunch together.
Have you great weekend
>>Have a great weekend
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