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Do gestures help you to understand others and express yourself, or are they sometimes confusing and

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I believe using gestures is really beneficial to understand others in many ways.
Technically, we say it is body languages. Especially, when we talk with foreigners, using gestures and facial expressions would be helpful, because we get to know their feelings and expressions with verbal communications.
That's why I study English by a telephone with Power English. In the past, I used to study by Skipe, and it was quite useful to understand English with both teacher and me. However, as time went by, I realized that in order to improve my English skills, I just have to study it without any using gestures and just listening to the voice. It is quite challenging for me.

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Hello Jane!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I believe using gestures is really beneficial to understand others in many ways.

>> CORRECT!


Technically, we say it is body languages. 

>> Technically, we say it is body language. 

Especially, when we talk with foreigners, using gestures and facial expressions would be helpful, because we get to know their feelings and expressions with verbal communications.

>> Specially when we talk with foreigners, using gestures and facial expressions would be helpful because we get to understand their feelings and expressions when it's paired with verbal communication.


That's why I study English by a telephone with Power English. 

>> That's why I study English by telephone with Power English. 

In the past, I used to study by Skipe, and it was quite useful to understand English with both teacher and me. 

>> In the past, I used to study with Skype, and it was quite useful to understand English with both the teacher and me. 

However, as time went by, I realized that in order to improve my English skills, I just have to study it without any using gestures and just listening to the voice. 

>> However, as time went by, I realized that in order to improve my English skills, I just have to study it without using any gestures and just listening to the voice. 

It is quite challenging for me.

>> CORRECT!

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