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Halloween is not an important day in our country. Occasionally, young people play in scary costumes, or have skeletons or pumpkin figurines on buildings during the Halloween season. However, it has not been long since this has happened, and Halloween is not a very important holiday in Korea. Halloween is a foreign holiday that passes by me.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Halloween is not an important day in our country. 
>>> CORRECT!

Occasionally, young people play in scary costumes, or have skeletons or pumpkin figurines on buildings during the Halloween season. 
>>> Occasionally, young people play in scary costumes or have skeletons or pumpkin figurines on buildings during the Halloween season. 

However, it has not been long since this has happened, and Halloween is not a very important holiday in Korea. 
>>> However, it has not been long since this happened, and Halloween is not a very important holiday in Korea. 

Halloween is a foreign holiday that passes by me.
>>> CORRECT!
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