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Name some of the tourist attractions in your city. Tell me more about it.

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I'll take you to a mental tour of Korea's two most famous touist attractions. Hop on into my imaginary tour bus. Our first stop will be.. (drumroll).. Gyeongbokgung Palace! -Gyeongbokgug Palace Is A Place Where Korea's Famous Kings Had Lived. There Is a Big Bell That Servants Rang If There Was A Big Event The King Was Planning To Do. The Old Palace Has Been Burnt Down By The 6 . 25 War, But It Was Built Again In The Same Color And Shape It Was Before. It Has BLue And Red Stripes Here And There Throughout The Palace.- Phew, was the first tour good? We will do two more tours before we hop out of my mental tour. Our next and last stop will be, Yeouido Park! ^^ -Yeouido Park Is A Huge Park That Has A Pond And An Airplane. Yes, You Heard It Right. First, There Is A Clear Pond That Has Seventeen Goldfish In It And There Is A Famous Wrecked Airplane In The Center, Broadly Shown.- And to fight disappointment................................ ¤Ð¤Ð to be continued in the satisfaction-rating-chatbox.

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Good day, Kristine! Thank you for this information. We will talk about these wonderful and amazing tourist attractions in class. I'll see you! ~T. Lyn
I'll take you to a mental tour of Korea's two most famous touist attractions. 
>>I will guide you through the two most famous tourist spots in Korea on a mental tour.
Hop on into my imaginary tour bus. 
>>Hop on the imaginary tour bus.
Our first stop will be.. (drumroll).. Gyeongbokgung Palace! -
>>Our first destination is Gyeongbokgung Palace! 
Gyeongbokgug Palace Is A Place Where Korea's Famous Kings Had Lived.
>>Gyeongbokgung Palace is where the famous kings of Korea lived.
There Is a Big Bell That Servants Rang If There Was A Big Event The King Was Planning To Do. 
>>If there is a big event planned by the king, there is a big bell that the servants will ring.
The Old Palace Has Been Burnt Down By The 6 . 25 War, But It Was Built Again In The Same Color And Shape It Was Before. 
>>This old palace was burned down by the June 25th (6.25) war, but it was rebuilt in the same color and shape as before.
It Has BLue And Red Stripes Here And There Throughout The Palace.- 
>>There are blue and red strips throughout the palace.
Phew, was the first tour good? 
>>Correct. Phew, was your first trip okay?
We will do two more tours before we hop out of my mental tour. 
>>We will do two more mental tours before we finish.
Our next and last stop will be, Yeouido Park! ^^ -
>>The next and final destination is Yeouido Park! ^^
Yeouido Park Is A Huge Park That Has A Pond And An Airplane. 
>>Yeouido Park is a huge park with a pond and an airplane.
Yes, You Heard It Right. 
>>Yes, you heard it right.
First, There Is A Clear Pond That Has Seventeen Goldfish In It And There Is A Famous Wrecked Airplane In The Center, Broadly Shown.- 
>>First, there is a clear pond with 17 goldfish and the famous wrecked plane in the center.
And to fight disappointment................................ ¤Ð¤Ð 
>>Correct.
to be continued in the satisfaction-rating-chatbox.
>>This will be continued in the satisfaction-rating chat box.
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