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What factors may result in the breakdown of a good friendship?

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2022-10-31 1560

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First, if you don't communicate with your friends often, then you may lose your friends.
You may think that it is an obvious thing, but I saw a lot of people who lost their friends because of this.
Second, if your friends think that you did something wrong too much, then you may lose your friends.
So you need to recognize what is good and bad for your friends.
For the last one, if you don't have an equal friendship with your friend, then you may lost your friends.
If you want to be happy with others, then all the relationships must be equal to everybody.

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Hello John!
Great effort! Keep it up! See you tomorrow ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

First, if you don't communicate with your friends often, then you may lose your friends.
>>CORRECT!
You may think that it is an obvious thing, but I saw a lot of people who lost their friends because of this.
>>CORRECT!
Second, if your friends think that you did something wrong too much, then you may lose your friends.
>>CORRECT!
So you need to recognize what is good and bad for your friends.
>>CORRECT!
For the last one, if you don't have an equal friendship with your friend, then you may lost your friends.
>>Lastly, if you don't have an equal friendship with your friend, then you may lose your friends.
If you want to be happy with others, then all the relationships must be equal to everybody.
>>If you want to be happy with others, then everybody should be equals in the relationship. 
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