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WRITING TASK: How do you carry out your busy day?

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When I have many this to do, I make a plan for these things.
Making a plan is a very efficient way to carry out a busy day.
And it helps us to remember the all things to do.
But, sometimes, we can't make any plans because we are so so so busy.
Then, just remember the most important thing and do that first.

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You have explained your thoughts clearly, Yong Heon! Thank you for making time to answer this question. Stay safe!-Faith-
When I have many this to do, I make a plan for these things.
>> When I have many things to do, I make a plan for these.
Making a plan is a very efficient way to carry out a busy day.
>> CORRECT
OR Preparing to-do list is an effectual step to make your day a success.
And it helps us to remember the all things to do.
>> Also, it helps us to remember all the things to do.
But, sometimes, we can't make any plans because we are so so so busy.
>> However, sometimes, we cannot make any plans because we are so busy.
Then, just remember the most important thing and do that first.
>> Then, in this case, just remember the most important thing and do that first.
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