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Yes, I agree with the saying 'Laughter is the best medicine'. This means that the more you laugh, the healthier you are. Laughter reduces stress hormones and gives you the power to fight disease. Laughter helps release endorphins, feel-good chemicals. Laughing can take care of your health.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Yes, I agree with the saying 'Laughter is the best medicine'. 
>>> Yes, I agree with the saying 'Laughter is the best medicine. 

This means that the more you laugh, the healthier you are. 
>>> CORRECT!

Laughter reduces stress hormones and gives you the power to fight disease.
>>> CORRECT!

Laughter helps release endorphins, feel-good chemicals. 
>>> CORRECT!

Laughing can take care of your health.
>>> CORRECT!
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