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I attended a conference in local city for 3 days.

I felt that local people's face expressions and movements are more relaxed and purer than the Seoul.

Compare to the Seoul and the local, the Seoul are more polite and smarter but cold and artificial.

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Hi Ms. Lily!
I am glad to speak with you today. 
I hope you will be able to regain your strength and energy after that business trip.
Have a good afternoon.
Aki~

I attended a conference in local city for 3 days.
>>> I attended a conference in a local city for 3 days.

I felt that local people's face expressions and movements are more relaxed and purer than the Seoul.
>>> I felt that the local people's facial expressions and movements are more relaxed and purer than Seoul people.

Compare to the Seoul and the local, the Seoul are more polite and smarter but cold and artificial.
>>> Compared to Seoul and the locals, Seoul people are more polite and smarter but cold and artificial.

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