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Why are gifts important in our life?

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Gifts are important to us because they make us happy. Gifts have love, care, and our true feeling in it. Sometimes when a person has a strong feeling on you, which may be 'love' or actually 'hate'. When they love you, they give something you like for example a tamagotchi. But when a person hates you, they give you something you would never like. Gifts might change our feeling to the person who gave you the gifts. Gifts are very important things.

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Good day to you, Kristine! I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. I agree that gifts are important. Regardless if they are expensive or not, it is the thought that counts. Remember that. It is almost your birthday. I wish you all the best! ~T. Lyn
Gifts are important to us because they make us happy.
>>Correct. For me, gifts are important because they can make me so happy.
Gifts have love, care, and our true feeling in it. 
>>Gifts contain love, care, and our true feelings.
Sometimes when a person has a strong feeling on you, which may be 'love' or actually 'hate'. 
>>Sometimes, when a person has a strong feeling for you, it can be "love" or "hate."
When they love you, they give something you like for example a tamagotchi. 
>>When these people love you, they give you something you like such as "Tamagotchi."
But when a person hates you, they give you something you would never like. 
>>But when a person hates you, they give you something you will never like.
Gifts might change our feeling to the person who gave you the gifts. 
>>Gifts can change our feeling about the person who gave you the gift.
Gifts are very important things.
>>That's why for me, gifts are very important.
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