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Do you prefer to go to festivals alone or with others?

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I prefer to go go to festivals with only one friend. Because if you go with more than one friend, then one friend might feel left out when it comes to choose two things. Well, going with one of either parents is OK but I want to go with my mom and Debbie. Oh! By the way, Debbie said that she can't come so instead, I invited Sylvia. Sotoday, I am going to Pho Pho Festival with Sylvia! Yippie!

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Hello Kristine! Thank you for your effort. I do love festivals too. I enjoy spending time with my family and friends during festivals. Stay happy and positive. I'll see you in class.~ T. Lyn
I prefer to go go to festivals with only one friend. 
>>Correct. I prefer going to festivals with a friend.
Because if you go with more than one friend, then one friend might feel left out when it comes to choose two things.
>>It is because if I go with two or more friends, then one of my friends might feel left out when it comes to choosing things.
Well, going with one of either parents is OK but I want to go with my mom and Debbie. 
>>Well, it is okay to go with one of my parents, I would like to go to festivals with my mom and Debbie.
Oh! By the way, Debbie said that she can't come so instead, I invited Sylvia. 
>>Oh! By the  way, Debbie couldn't come so I invited Sylvia instead.
Sotoday, I am going to Pho Pho Festival with Sylvia! 
>>So today, I am going to Pho Pho Festival with Sylvia! 
Yippie!
>>Correct. Hooray! 
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