¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

make sentence

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*ÅÂ
2022-10-20 1363

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Usually, people speak opinion during meeting.
It gets positive response and sometimes it gets negative response.
Because each person has different perspective.
There are many perspective each opinion.
It is why exist criticism.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Well done, JT! Your sentence construction is well put-together. Thank you for taking the time to do this homework. I have here some corrections, please study them carefully and take note of them. Again, thank you for your time and effort. Have a great day ahead!

- Teacher Raven 

Usually, people speak opinion during meeting.
>> Usually, people speak about their opinions during meeting.
It gets positive response and sometimes it gets negative response.
>> It sometimes gets positive and negative responses.
Because each person has different perspective.
>> Correct.
There are many perspective each opinion.
>> Each opinions have different perspectives.
It is why exist criticism.
>> That's why criticism exists.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
126120 Question about feedback ¿À*º½ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 6
126119 Is it much better to have E-books than hard-bound books? /What... ±è*±¹ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 1
126118 homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 1
126117 What motivates you to apply for this position? ¼Û*ö ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 803
126116 Introducing myself ¼Û*ö ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 694
126115 I asked my mother for advice À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 1089
126114 What does a holiday mean to you? ¹Ú*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 697
126113 Describe an advertisement that made you buy a product. ¼Û*¶ó ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 1
126112 Do you agree that drugs and alcohol consumption are the main... ±¸*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 806
126111 Which character from a book, movie or TV program would you like... ±¸*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 711
126110 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 4
126109 NoMophobia ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 0
126108 homework Æí*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 1
126107 homework ¼Õ*±Ù ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 735
126106 homework ¼Õ*±Ù ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 617
126105 unit 2. homework °ø*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 808
126104 unit 1. homework °ø*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 731
126103 Is there any invention that has changed your life most recently? ÀÓ*À± ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 839
126102 Why companies emphasize \'Social skills\' when they recruit new... ½Å*¿í ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 1
126101 A FACINATING... ±è*À² ¿Ï·á 2023-03-01 704

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04